翻译一下老外的话:
You get a box of 12 new pens, 4 of each color. The 329 is "inspired" by the Parker 51 and Sheaffer pens in design. Hero pens are inexpensive but a good pen for the money. You could get a bad one even in a new box of 12 as Hero's quality control could be better. But overall they are a heck of an impressive pen for the price! Excellent student pens.
You could get a bad one even in a new box of 12 (这里应该是 "即使给你一盒全新12支,你也会得到一支坏的")
even 是 『即使』,在 even 后面的 『条件』正常是和even前面发生的事情背道而驰
as Hero's quality control could be better. (因为英雄品检还可以做好一点 - "could be better" 这里是"做得不好,应该做好一点)
But overall they are a heck of an impressive pen for the price!
(但是总的来说这个价格它们算很不错)
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由于英雄质量管理比较严格所以在一盒12支笔中间你很难找到一支质量不合格的笔 这是用的虚拟语气!
应该是
You could not get a bad one even in a new box of 12
(即使给你一盒全新12支,你也不会得到一支坏的 - 不过这样逻辑不通,因为给你一盒全新12支你就有「你得到好笔」的暗示,和even的「背道而驰」不符合。You could not get a good pen even in a new box of 12逻辑就对。 )
as Hero's quality control could not be better (好的不能再好)
翻译有很大的错误啊!You could get a bad one even in a new box of 12 as Hero's quality control could be better 这句话的意思是 由于英雄质量管理比较严格所以在一盒12支笔中间你很难找到一支质量不合格的笔 这是用的虚拟语气!